Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Your writing throughout this paper, on the level of the sentence, is admirably clear and straightforward. Which makes it all the more frustrating that your paper doesn't have anything to say...lacking a thesis...meanders...what's the point of this meditation?"

Wait what? I lack ideas?
Tell me something I don't know.


1 comment:

  1. Just for the record, I find you a most inspired individual - even though that may or may not manifest itself in academic papers. Oh and just so you know, I am coming out for a week this time, I believe in July. No reason to resent BYU except that they criticize your muse:)


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